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(last five digits of
your student no.)
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your student no.)
Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overviews
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
[embed your proto-portfolios here]
(See: Note 2, below.)
1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below[.])
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles [+ links] | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words) | Witting Placement essay | Wednesday, April 9, 2008 | 5 | 396 | 3 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words) |
| Wednesday, April 30, 2008 | 7 | 587 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Another review 08.06.01 | Think anout "Cats" ~Writing Essay: Performance Review1-04 | Saturday, May 31, 2008 | 5 | 546 | 1 | 1 | 3 | 0 |
| Language learning history 08.06.15 | Writing Essay 1-05 ~In Order To be a Global Person~ | Wednesday, June 11, 2008 | 6 | 736 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| 5th essay (pending) TBA | Detail about Me!! (Writing Essay1-06) | July 1, 2008 | ||||||
| University Life | Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3 | Friday, May 16, 2008 | 6 | 505 | 5 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- |
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded
1.2. Best Esssay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- My best essay is "Think about Cats", number four essay. First, I can write about my favorite, so it is easy to write. I can make five paragraphs, and make links and put on the pictures. I can enjoyed write this post. Second, I try to make clearly for visiters. I used many colors, pictures. I couldn't explain all about "Cats", so I put on the links because I really wanted to know about my favorite. Therefore I think this is my best essay.
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd) | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | WinK Wiki Resource: Model Book Reviews | 2008/04/18 | 42 words | I talked how I try in this semester. |
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Essays 1-03 ♥ My University Life ~Active and Exciting~ ♥ | 58 words | I wrote about her essay, and asked a question. | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3 | Friday, May 16, 2008 | 64 words | She wrote her impression and asked me questions. Besides she gave me message. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd) | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments*[*] |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3 | Friday, May 16, 2008 | 172 words | All of them gave me some questions and massages. |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | May 21, 2008 10:29 AM | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 190 words | I answered thier questions, and sent messages to them. I wrote what will I do since then. |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | My friends!! | Sunday, May 4, 2008 | 32 words | She told about her and gave me a message. I could know about her, so I wanted to tell her about me. |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | May 6, 2008 9:25 PM | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 30 words | I thanked for her comments and ansered question. And then, I asked her my question about her. |
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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?
- Yes, I do. I put it sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
I like giving comments and receive comments. I often give comments to sther stdents, but there are no comments on my blog. I am sad. I try to make interesting blog .
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 1-01 | Impression of "Babe" ( Book review 1-01) | Wednesday, March 5, 2008 | 304 | 0 |
| 1-02 | The Secret Garden ( book review 1-02 ) | Tuesday, March 11, 2008 | 234 | 0 |
| 1-03 | The Ring ( book review 1-03 ) | 2008/03/18 | 293 | 0 |
| 1-04 | Food For Thought ( book review1-04 ) | 2008/03/22 | 319 | 0 |
| 1-05 | Black Beauty ( book review1-05 ) | 2008/03/25 | 338 | 0 |
| 1-06 | Matilda ( book review1-06 ) | 2008/03/28 | 301 | 0 |
| 1-07 | My Family and Other Animals ( book review1-07 ) | 2008/04/03 | 187 | 0 |
| 1-08 | Ring of Bright Water ( book review1-08 ) | 2008/04/06 | 326 | 0 |
| 1-09 | My favorite movie ( book review1-09 ) | 2006/04/10 | 326 | 0 |
| 1-10 | Anne of Green Gables ( book review1-10 ) | 2008/04/26 | 326 | 0 |
| 1-11 | The Jungle Book : BR1-11 | 2008/05/05 | 325 | 0 |
| 1-12 | Lovly Rabbits | 2008/05/19 | 224 | 0 |
| 1-13 | Think about Peace: Book Reveiw1-12 | 2008/05/28 | 241 | 0 |
| 1-14 | Book Review1-13 ~Squirrel~ | 2008/06/08 | 185 | 0 |
| 15 | Lovely Tales(BR 1-15) | Thursday, July 3, 2008 | 548 | 0 |
| --- | --- | TOTALS: |
Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.
- My the best book reveiw is "Think about Peace: Book Reveiw1-12". I think about big problem and wrote my opinion. After that, I could post about peace.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog have an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | ○ | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ○ | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.
- ...I wrote about not only daily life, but also studies, for example, linguistics, origin of language, and so on. I researched it and wrote my opinions.
3. ...I used many colors in order to show what I want to say clearly.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing
- ... I wrote blog fifth in a week at least. I did movie review, book review, diary, researching, and so on. I want many people to read them, and share thinking.
6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors
- ...
Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc
- portfolios (2007-08).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
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