I love Disney Land ~WE rewrite 2~

How many times have you been to Disney Land?? I love Disney Land so I always go there when I visit my friend's house in Tokyo. I went there last summer vacation. It is known to many people as a dream land. I agree with them because I have been never tired of there. All of things in Disney Land makes me happy, and I can enjoy all day because of three good points about Disney Land. That is the reason why I like Disney Land. Therefore, I want to explain the three points.

First, there are many attractions. It makes me excited. I always get "fast pass" in order to ride popular attractions. You have to run to get it because fast pass is special tickets for popular attraction, so it will have gone soon!! Especially, the three best of mountains is so popular. In the "Splash moutain", you can see many cute characters, but you can't be relived because the boat that you ride fell down suddenly at last. "Space mountain" is speedy roller coaster. You are in the space, so you can see only so many stars. The coaster go around in the situation. You can't think ahead which direction the coaster go. And then, you can see all around of Disney Land when you ride "Big thunder mountain". The landscape is so nice both of day and night. You should ride this one the last.

There are not only roller coaster but also shows, ghost house, and so on. My favorite is "It's a small world". t is a good unknown spot. There are not so many people in it. I mean you can ride it soon without waiting. And then, you can learn about culture in it. You travel all over the world, and the many dolls, that wear cultural uniform, play traditional instruments, sing a song. You can be relaxed in it!! Besides, it is inside, so it is cool in summer and warm in winter. It is great situation, isn't it??

Second, I can eat many delicious foods there. Do you know that there are two kinds of spot where you can eat? One is restaurant, the other is small shop. In the restaurants, you can eat many traditional food, Chinese, Italian, and so on. It is a little expensive, but you can feel rich. They are so delicious. You can eat with characters in some restaurant. In small shop, you can buy light meal. It is less expensive than in restaurant. It may be good idea that you see many shops and eat many kinds of foods. I will give you some recommendations. When you want to eat at restaurant, how about "Polynesian Restaurant". There are Riro and Stich and they show you their performance.
And then, if you will go to eat snacks, you had better to eat churos. It is around 150 yen, and there are many kinds of tastes, like plane, honey, chocolate, cinnamon, and so on. I can recommend you pop corns, cappuccino taste!

Third, you can see many interesting, cute, and beautiful view there. Do you know about "Hided Mickey Mouse"? In the Disney Land, there are many Mickey you will not notice. For example, figure on the wall, shape of the tree, and so on. They control even shadow!! The shape of shadow is Mickey. I was surprised when I know the existence. I never find it, so I try to find it next time. And then, of course, there are many characters and they are so cute and funny. They sometime appear, so you should take pictures with them. You can see many characters also in the parade. I recommend you night parade. It is so beautiful. Many lights twinkle, and I admire it.

Why do you feel that Disney Land has fantastic view? Because there are no garbage on the ground and all of flowers is not die. They care about detail point, so we can enjoy the environment. Besides, we can see many type of world in each area. I mean you can see traditional building in Western Land, cute building in Fantasy Land.

These are the reason I like Disney Land. It makes me happy, so I forget my trouble in daily life. "Three special mountains" are so exciting, foods are great, and all of environment is fantastic in Disney Land. Especially, I like around Cinderella castle. I can see many parade, fire works, shows, and so on. And then, I feel that I come to dream land there the best. I really want to go there again and again!!

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If you want to know Disney land, please check this web-site!!
http://www.tokyodisneyresort.co.jp/tdl/

I love Disney land!! ( WE 2-03 reright ver.)

How many times have you been to Disney Land?? I love Disney Land so I always go there when I visit my friend's house in Tokyo. I went there in last summer vacation. It is known to many people as a dream land. I agree with them because I am never tired of there. All of things in Disney Land makes me happy, and I can enjoy all day because of three good points about Disney Land. That is the reason why I like that place. Therefore, I want to explain the three points.

First, there are many attractions. It makes me exciting. I always get "fast pass" in order to ride popular attractions. You have to run to get it because fast pass is for popular attrction, and it will have gone soon!! Especially, the three best of mountains is so popular. In the "Sprush mountain", you can see many cute characters, but you can't be relived because it the boat that you ride fell down suddenly at last. "Space mountain" is speedy roller coaster. You are in the space, so you can see only so much stars. the coaster go around in the situation. You can't think ahead which direction the coaster go. And then, you can see all around of Disney Land when you ride "Big thunder mountain". The landscape is so nice both of day and night. You should ride this one the last.

There are not only roller coaster but also shows, ghost house, and so on. My favorite is "It's a small world". t is a good unknown spot. There are the people not so much. I mean you can ride it soon without waiting. And then, you can learn about culture in it. You travel all over the world, and the many dolls, that wear cultural uniform, play tradition instrument, sing a song. You can be relaxed in it!! Besides, it is inside, so ti is cool in summer and warm in winter. It is great situation, isn't it??

Second, I can eat many delicious food there. Do you know that there are two kinds of spot where you can eat? One is restaurant, the other is small shop. In the restaurant, you can eat many tradition food, Chinese, Italian, and so on. It is a little expensive, but you can feel rich. They are so delicious. You can eat with characters in some restaurant. In small shop, you can buy light meal. It is less expensive than in restaurant. It may be good idea that you call at many shops and eat many kinds of foods. I will give you some recommendations. When you want to eat at restaurant, how about "Polynesian Restaurant". There are Riro and Stich and they show you their performance.
And then, if you will go to eat snacks, you had better to eat churos. It is around 150 yen, and there are many kinds of tastes, like plane, honney, chocorate, sinamon, and so on. I can recommend you pop corns, capchinno taste!

Third, you can see many interesting, cute, and beautiful view there. Do you know about "Hide Mickey Mouse"? In the Disney Land, there are many Mickey you don't notice. For example, figure on the wall, shape of the tree, and so on. They control even shadow!! The shape of shadow is Mickey. I was surprised when I know the existence. I never find it, so I try to find it next time. And then, of course, there are many characters and they are so cute and funny. They sometime appear, so you should take pictures with them. You can see many characters also in the parade. I recommend you night parade. It is so beautiful. Many lights twinkle, and I admire it.

Why do you feel that Disney Land has fantastic view? Because there are no garages on the ground and all of flowers is not die. They care about detail point, so we can enjoy the environment. Besides, we can see many type of world in each area. I mean you can see traditional building in Western Land, cute building in Fantasy Land.

These are the reason I like Disney Land. It makes me happy, so I forget my trouble in daily life. Especially, I like around Cinderella castle. I can see many parade, fire works, shows, and so on. And then, I feel that I come to dream land there the best. I really want to go there again and again!!


If you want to know Disney land, please check this web-site!!
http://www.tokyodisneyresort.co.jp/tdl/
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WE2-03 Outline (Reright Ver.)

1, Introduction about Disney Land
-Generally thinking about Disney Land
-Why do I like Disney Land

2, Body
・First good point(attractions)
- many attractions
- roller coaster
- my favorite attraction

・Second good point(foods)
- delicious foods
- two kind of food shop
- my recommendation

・Third good point (situation)
- great view
- parade, cute characters
- music
- culture and tradition

Finally good point
- no garbege
- many beautiful flower

3, Conclusion
– my favorite part of Disney land

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Writing assignment 2-01 rewritten: Let's study our earth!!

How much knowledge about the earth do you have? There are many wonderful things on the earth, for example, countries, animals, archaeological creature, nature, and of course human beings! Most of people don't care that where they are, how they live, and so on. We have too less knowledge about the earth. I want to introduce this web site "National Geographic Kids". If you see this site, you can discover what you didn't know. There are many good points to learn in this web site. I found this web site because of my teacher. He recommend this site when I told him that I like geography. Since then, I see this web site most of every day. I really like this web site. Now, I want to start introducing it.


First of all, you can check your geographic skill. You can know where the country is and many trivia about the country through the game. I recommend you one game, "Geo Spy". You may be know many countries name, but do you know where they are? You should click the right place of the country in this game. If you chose wrong place, this game give us the answer, so you can learn about it easily. Of course, I play this game many times. I can not get high score now, but I want to keep trying. Anyway, this site has a lot of games. More games you try, more knowledge you can get. Besides, you can see many archaeological things on it. You will be moved by the wonderful landscape even if you are not interested in the history. If you like animals, you should try animal games. You will see cute characters.



Second, you can watch many animals on this site such as penguins, dolphins, lions, pandas and so on. Of course, there are many pictures, movies, games about animals. There are particular explanations. I moved because these wonderful animals live somewhere on the earth. I have never seem wild elephants, cheetah, and so on. Do you know that elephants sometimes hug by wrapping their trunks together as greeting and affection? Also, there are some animals I've never heard. If you like animals, I recommend this relatives site, here. And then, some of strange plants, like a Venus flytrap, are on it. I have heard about it but I didn't think it is a such interesting plants.


Third, you will know about many human beings and cultures, politics, history and so on. How do the foreign people live in daily life? And then, how do the other countries people think about Japan? You can know about both of them. Therefore, we can reconfirm our own country and learn other countries. It is important for me because even if you have many knowledge about others, it is no meaning when you don't know about yours. After that, you should check the other countries. Each country has each good individuality. All of the people live hard. When you travel foreign countries, you'd better to check this web site. You can learn the country before the trip. It makes your trip comfortable!!



You know, you can get many kind of knowledge in this site. There are many fantastic things on the earth. After I see this site, I try to care about the earth. Although the earth is the planet that I have live, I was too unconcern for it until now. We have to cherish our planet because many living things, are on it. Therefore, we should know about it more and find what we can do for the earth. That is why I recommend to study about the earth.


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