Portfolios

Student ID: 13107143

Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a

[Please delete the unsuitable class section and "OR" (above), along with this line of remarks.]

(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	Let's study our earth!! Writing assignment 2-01 rewritten: Let's study our earth!	08.09.28 08.10.05	5 5	510 616	7 0	4 4	3 3	0 0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	I love Disneeeeey!! I love Disney Land ~WE rewrite 2~	08.10.08 08.10.28	7 8	661 773	0 0	1 1	1 1	0 0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~	08.10.31	7	726	7	3	3	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	My Great Community	08.11.15	5	506	0	0	0	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	Smile of Water ~ Writing Essay "Secret of Kumamoto"~	08.11.29	5	442	0	0	1	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	Learning Many Things	08.12.13	7	774	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• I think my best eaay is "Let's study our earth!!z",I can fine interesting web-site, and intriduse th good point by link and pictures. I can reate paragraph well.
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	MR2-1: "Mrs.Doubtfire"	08.11.04	84	I wote my feeling about her essay, and opinions.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~	08.11.05	109	The person gave me a question and opinions.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~	08.10.31	447	They gave me many questions, and feelings.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.11.05	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	128	I commented to each person in ane comment. I respond their questions.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	Banana Cake	08.12.02	24	She gave me feling of about it and pleased it.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	08.12.17	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	9	I say thnks for her comment.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

• I put it on the sidebar.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• I gave comments to the others, but I didn't comment other posts often.
  
• I couldn't recieve so many comments from the others.
  

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	Alice In Wonderland ( Book Review 2-01)	08.08.10	253	0
2-02	Robin Hood ~BR2-02~	08.08.20	265	0
2-03	Short Stories ~BR 2-03~	08.08.24	398	0
2-04	Wicked and Humorous Tales ~BR 2-04~	08.09.08	321	0
2-05	David Copperfield ~BR 2-05~	08.09.16	409	0
2-06	Babe~Pig in the City~ BR2-06	08.09.25	523	0
2-07	Five Famous Fairy Tales ~BR 2-07~	08.10.09	279	0
2-08	"The Last of the Mohicans" ~BR2-08~	08.10.19	389	0
2-09	The Jumping Frog ~BR 2-09~	08.10.22	249	0
2-10	"Nate The Great Stalks Stupedweed" ~BR2-10~	08.11.08	160	0
2-11	A Christmas Carol ~ BR 2-11~	08.11.24	305	0
2-12	A Funny Guy ~ BR2-12~	08.12.17	193	0
2-13	The Glenger Bread Boy ~ BR2-13~	08.12.17	268	0
2-14	Biscuit Finds a Friends	08.12.17	134	0
2-15	David and The Giant ~BR2-15~	08.12.19	268	0
2-16	STUART LITTLE ~BR 2-16~	08.12.21	304	0
2-17	O. Henry ~ BR 2-17~	08.12.21	311	0
2-18	Fly Away Home ~ BR 2-18~	08.12.21	350	0
---	---	Totals:	5379

Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• "The Last of the Mohicans" ~BR2-08~is the bst in my book reveiws. First, I explained about characters. It is clear to know the story. Second, I summeraised the story. The readrs can understand what happend in the story. Finally, I wrote my opinion about the book. It is important for book review. Therefore I think it is the best.
  

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	〇
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	〇
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	〇
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	〇
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	〇
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	〇
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	〇
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	〇
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	〇
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)	〇
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")	〇
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	〇
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 40 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below animals (4) books (32) brainstorms (3) classes (8) communities (2) countries (7) cultures (12) curiosities (25) diaries (99) doramas (1) education (1) English lounge (5) Essay Prep (10) favorite (8) first writing (1) flowers (10) foods (16) free writing (4) friends (12) going abraods (8) holidays (7) Introduction (1) Japanese languages (3) languages (1) links (16) lists (2) Movies (10) news (3) outlines (3) part time job (1) place (1) portfolios (2) quickpost (15) reviews (41) rewrites (4) songs (4) sports (9) studies (27) tests (2) TOEFLs (3) trips (5) typing tests (5) vacatioｎs (1) web-sites (1) Writing class. essay (22) YouTubes (8)	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	〇
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?	〇
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? 18 posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	〇
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? 8 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	〇
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? 7 posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: 1, You-Tube 2, news	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. nothing	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. I tried to use coloer and font size in this semester. It makes the readers to read easily.
2. I tried to rewrite Writing class essay. It is good training for me. My classmates gave me some opinions to my essay. I rewrite my essay though their suggestions.
3. I wrote about recent news. Nowadays I often have interested in the news, so I tried to write news reviews.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

• It was hard works for me. However, I could keep trying.
• I researched many things in order to write blogs, for example, linguistics, news, and so on. It was difficult to write in English, but it was also good training.
• At first, I couldn't understand how to use blog. However, I could know it.
  

6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

• We have to be interested in many kind of things in order to wirte blogs five times in a week.
• We should think about the readers. We have to write blogs that the readers can read easily and enjoying.
• The content is so important. Dialies are OK, but we have to write about more seroius things, for example, news review, movie review, and so on.
  

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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License:

This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License. Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog" (without quotation marks).

Writing Homework

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Student ID: vwxyz
(last five digits of
your student no.)

Portfolio for Writing III,
Section 1a [or] 1c
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overviews

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

[embed your proto-portfolios here]

(See: Note 2, below.)

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below[.])

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Self-introduction 08.04.20 (250 words)	Witting Placement essay	Wednesday, April 9, 2008	5	396	3	0	0	0
Movie review 08.05.04 (300 words)	Do you know what real friendship and real beaity are?? MR 1-01	Wednesday, April 30, 2008	7	587	0	0	1	0
Another review 08.06.01	Think anout "Cats" ~Writing Essay: Performance Review1-04	Saturday, May 31, 2008	5	546	1	1	3	0
Language learning history 08.06.15	Writing Essay 1-05 ~In Order To be a Global Person~	Wednesday, June 11, 2008	6	736	0	0	1	0
5th essay (pending) TBA	Detail about Me!! (Writing Essay1-06)	July 1, 2008
University Life	Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3	Friday, May 16, 2008	6	505	5	0	0	0
Totals	---	---

Key:
¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media embedded

1.2. Best Esssay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My best essay is "Think about Cats", number four essay. First, I can write about my favorite, so it is easy to write. I can make five paragraphs, and make links and put on the pictures. I can enjoyed write this post. Second, I try to make clearly for visiters. I used many colors, pictures. I couldn't explain all about "Cats", so I put on the links because I really wanted to know about my favorite. Therefore I think this is my best essay.

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	WinK Wiki Resource: Model Book Reviews	2008/04/18	42 words	I talked how I try in this semester.
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Essays 1-03 ♥ My University Life ~Active and Exciting~ ♥		58 words	I wrote about her essay, and asked a question.
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3	Friday, May 16, 2008	64 words	She wrote her impression and asked me questions. Besides she gave me message.
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*[*]
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Wonderful University Life Writing essay 01-3	Friday, May 16, 2008	172 words	All of them gave me some questions and massages.
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	May 21, 2008 10:29 AM	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	190 words	I answered thier questions, and sent messages to them. I wrote what will I do since then.
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	My friends!!	Sunday, May 4, 2008	32 words	She told about her and gave me a message. I could know about her, so I wanted to tell her about me.
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	May 6, 2008 9:25 PM	---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	30 words	I thanked for her comments and ansered question. And then, I asked her my question about her.

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• Yes, I do. I put it sidebar.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments


I like giving comments and receive comments. I often give comments to sther stdents, but there are no comments on my blog. I am sad. I try to make interesting blog .

3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
1-01	Impression of "Babe" ( Book review 1-01)	Wednesday, March 5, 2008	304	0
1-02	The Secret Garden ( book review 1-02 )	Tuesday, March 11, 2008	234	0
1-03	The Ring ( book review 1-03 )	2008/03/18	293	0
1-04	Food For Thought ( book review1-04 )	2008/03/22	319	0
1-05	Black Beauty ( book review1-05 )	2008/03/25	338	0
1-06	Matilda ( book review1-06 )	2008/03/28	301	0
1-07	My Family and Other Animals ( book review1-07 )	2008/04/03	187	0
1-08	Ring of Bright Water ( book review1-08 )	2008/04/06	326	0
1-09	My favorite movie ( book review1-09 )	2006/04/10	326	0
1-10	Anne of Green Gables ( book review1-10 )	2008/04/26	326	0
1-11	The Jungle Book : BR1-11	2008/05/05	325	0
1-12	Lovly Rabbits	2008/05/19	224	0
1-13	Think about Peace: Book Reveiw1-12	2008/05/28	241	0
1-14	Book Review1-13 ~Squirrel~	2008/06/08	185	0
15	Lovely Tales(BR 1-15)	Thursday, July 3, 2008	548	0
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Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review


Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• My the best book reveiw is "Think about Peace: Book Reveiw1-12". I think about big problem and wrote my opinion. After that, I could post about peace.
  

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog have an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	○
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	○
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	○
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	○
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	○
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	○
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? 18 other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? 25 posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	○
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* 2 posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? 4 posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: ...You Tube ...Slide Show ...	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. ...I wrote about not only daily life, but also studies, for example, linguistics, origin of language, and so on. I researched it and wrote my opinions.

2. ...I put on many graphics and links in order to show my thinking

3. ...I used many colors in order to show what I want to say clearly.

5.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• ... I wrote blog fifth in a week at least. I did movie review, book review, diary, researching, and so on. I want many people to read them, and share thinking.

6.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• ...

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Notes:
This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc

1. portfolios (2007-08).
   



2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios in the footer of your blog.
   


3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008)
   

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