Student ID: 13107143
Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a
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Section 1a
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(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)
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1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Let's study our earth!!Writing assignment 2-01 rewritten: Let's study our earth! | 08.09.2808.10.05 | 5 5 | 510 616 | 7 0 | 4 4 | 3 3 | 0 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | I love Disneeeeey!!I love Disney Land ~WE rewrite 2~ | 08.10.08 08.10.28 | 7 8 | 661 773 | 0 0 | 1 1 | 1 1 | 0 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~ | 08.10.31 | 7 | 726 | 7 | 3 | 3 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | My Great Community | 08.11.15 | 5 | 506 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | Smile of Water ~ Writing Essay "Secret of Kumamoto"~ | 08.11.29 | 5 | 442 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | Learning Many Things | 08.12.13 | 7 | 774 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think my best eaay is "Let's study our earth!!z",I can fine interesting web-site, and intriduse th good point by link and pictures. I can reate paragraph well.
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | 08.11.04 | 84 | I wote my feeling about her essay, and opinions. | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~ | 08.11.05 | 109 | The person gave me a question and opinions. |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | The Relationships with People ~ MR 2-01~ | 08.10.31 | 447 | They gave me many questions, and feelings. |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.11.05 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 128 | I commented to each person in ane comment. I respond their questions. |
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | Banana Cake | 08.12.02 | 24 | She gave me feling of about it and pleased it. |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | 08.12.17 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 9 | I say thnks for her comment. |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- I put it on the sidebar.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
- I gave comments to the others, but I didn't comment other posts often.
- I couldn't recieve so many comments from the others.
3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | Alice In Wonderland ( Book Review 2-01) | 08.08.10 | 253 | 0 |
| 2-02 | Robin Hood ~BR2-02~ | 08.08.20 | 265 | 0 |
| 2-03 | Short Stories ~BR 2-03~ | 08.08.24 | 398 | 0 |
| 2-04 | Wicked and Humorous Tales ~BR 2-04~ | 08.09.08 | 321 | 0 |
| 2-05 | David Copperfield ~BR 2-05~ | 08.09.16 | 409 | 0 |
| 2-06 | Babe~Pig in the City~ BR2-06 | 08.09.25 | 523 | 0 |
| 2-07 | Five Famous Fairy Tales ~BR 2-07~ | 08.10.09 | 279 | 0 |
| 2-08 | "The Last of the Mohicans" ~BR2-08~ | 08.10.19 | 389 | 0 |
| 2-09 | The Jumping Frog ~BR 2-09~ | 08.10.22 | 249 | 0 |
| 2-10 | "Nate The Great Stalks Stupedweed" ~BR2-10~ | 08.11.08 | 160 | 0 |
| 2-11 | A Christmas Carol ~ BR 2-11~ | 08.11.24 | 305 | 0 |
| 2-12 | A Funny Guy ~ BR2-12~ | 08.12.17 | 193 | 0 |
| 2-13 | The Glenger Bread Boy ~ BR2-13~ | 08.12.17 | 268 | 0 |
| 2-14 | Biscuit Finds a Friends | 08.12.17 | 134 | 0 |
| 2-15 | David and The Giant ~BR2-15~ | 08.12.19 | 268 | 0 |
| 2-16 | STUART LITTLE ~BR 2-16~ | 08.12.21 | 304 | 0 |
| 2-17 | O. Henry ~ BR 2-17~ | 08.12.21 | 311 | 0 |
| 2-18 | Fly Away Home ~ BR 2-18~ | 08.12.21 | 350 | 0 |
| --- | --- | Totals: | 5379 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment."The Last of the Mohicans" ~BR2-08~is the bst in my book reveiws. First, I explained about characters. It is clear to know the story. Second, I summeraised the story. The readrs can understand what happend in the story. Finally, I wrote my opinion about the book. It is important for book review. Therefore I think it is the best.
4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media
| Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | 〇 | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | 〇 | |
| 4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar? | 〇 | |
| 5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3. Links & media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | 〇 | |
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| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | 〇 | |
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nothing | --- |
4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- I tried to use coloer and font size in this semester. It makes the readers to read easily.
- I tried to rewrite Writing class essay. It is good training for me. My classmates gave me some opinions to my essay. I rewrite my essay though their suggestions.
- I wrote about recent news. Nowadays I often have interested in the news, so I tried to write news reviews.
5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it
Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).- It was hard works for me. However, I could keep trying.
- I researched many things in order to write blogs, for example, linguistics, news, and so on. It was difficult to write in English, but it was also good training.
- At first, I couldn't understand how to use blog. However, I could know it.
6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors
- We have to be interested in many kind of things in order to wirte blogs five times in a week.
- We should think about the readers. We have to write blogs that the readers can read easily and enjoying.
- The content is so important. Dialies are OK, but we have to write about more seroius things, for example, news review, movie review, and so on.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
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