1, Introduction about Disney Land
-Generally thinking about Disney Land
-Why do I like Disney Land
2, Body
・First good point(attractions)
- many attractions
- roller coaster
- my favorite attraction
・Second good point(foods)
- delicious foods
- two kind of food shop
- my recommendation
・Third good point (situation)
- great view
- parade, cute characters
- music
- culture and tradition
Finally good point
- no garbege
- many beautiful flower
3, Conclusion
– my favorite part of Disney land
[70 words]
Wednesday, October 15, 2008
WE2-03 Outline (Reright Ver.)
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