blue topaz: Essay 2-03: What's your justice?
I chose this essay as the best essay!! She wrote about the movie clearly. I could enjoy reading it.
First, She separated by the theme. She think there are two important theme in the movie, humor and family. She included her opinions. I am interested in how she feel about the movie. Second, she used colored letters, so I could understand what is important for her. There are a few pictures, so we can image the seine of it even if we have never seen it.
For these reasons, I chose her essay as the best.
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