Showing posts with label Essay Prep. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Essay Prep. Show all posts

Wednesday, December 10, 2008

Learning with computer ~ Outline~

1, Introductions
it is nesessary in our daily life
it is useful

2, Body
◎I use computer for studies (Challenges)

  • Writing reports (words)
  • Creating interesting Blogs
◎Rsearching(Information)

  • When I use internet
  • Why I use it
  • What I be careful
◎I use computer for my enjoyment(Communication)

  • Facebook
◎Usefil apprications for me

  • Power Words
  • Typing Practicing
  • Media
◎Others

3,Conclusion
◎My thinking about learning

  • It is difficult sometimes
  • We need it in the future

[74 words]

Brain Storm ~ Writing Essay "Learning with computer"

Internet
it is complex for me
I know it is so important
in the future
useful
difficult
worry about warning
many company need computer skill
at least basic computer tools such as excel, word,
we can get two things in one way
good way to studying
I use Internet
writing reports
Power words
useful
communicate with many people in all over the world
nessesary in our life
feel that foregin country closer
faster than hand writing
easy to rewrite
imformation
learning English with computer
I can learn enjoying


[ 88 words]

Wednesday, November 26, 2008

Brain storm ~ Seacret of Kumamoto ~

water
ti makes for a long time
Sira-river
trees
nature power
origin of the river
clear water
works mutually
so much water
Shirakawa-yosimi shrine
save the water
springwater
important property
city planning
decrease the number of undergraund water
tree dam
store the water
keeping clear
many problems
we can do something to save the water

[57 words]

Water of Kumamoto ~ Free writing~

I will talk about water of Kumamoto. Of course, you know the water is do delicious. However, do you know why it is so delicious? I don't know clearly, but I can guess some reasons. First, there are Sira river. Shira river start from Mt. Aso. The water was made for a long time under the ground. It produce so much water. It is delicious because it takes so much time. Second there are many good trees in the Aso. The trees make water clean. Besides, the water grow the trees. More fresh trees grow, more delicious the water is. They works mutually. It is power of the nature. Human can't make it.

[115 words]
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Wednesday, November 19, 2008

blue topaz: Essay 2-03: What's your justice?

blue topaz: Essay 2-03: What's your justice?

I chose this essay as the best essay!! She wrote about the movie clearly. I could enjoy reading it.

First, She separated by the theme. She think there are two important theme in the movie, humor and family. She included her opinions. I am interested in how she feel about the movie. Second, she used colored letters, so I could understand what is important for her. There are a few pictures, so we can image the seine of it even if we have never seen it.

For these reasons, I chose her essay as the best.

[96 words]

Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Outline for My Community

Introduction
1. Swimming club - activity
- the reason why I started swimming

2. Body( Two Important Things)
Never giving up -
  • hard training( setting goals )
  • competition
  • the best time
Friends -
  • why they are important
  • what I learn through them (cooperation, encourage)
3. Conclusion
  • importance of never giving up and friends
  • treasure for me
  • in the future
[54 words]

Swimming

I was a member of swimming club when I was a high school student. The swimming club is important for my life. I could irreplaceable friends there. They were friends but at the same time, we were good rivals. We practiced togrther all the time, and competed each other. We often hang out together. Training was so hard. We swim at least two kiros and we often stay in a camp for training at school. At that time, we swam 10 kiros in one day. I always wanted to give up, but my friends encouraged me, so I could achive all of training. Of course I am not the member of the club, but I love swimming now!!

[118 words]

Brain storm about My Swimming Club

swimming club
high school
hard training
competition
best time
the reason shy I start swim
when I was a child
ten years
with dolphins
free style
breast style
back style
butterfly
individual medley
friends are rivals
after school
good relationship continue even now
talk about simmers
the world 0.01 seconds
feel good
I like to see the light in the water
not fast
achive the all of training
stay in s camp for training

[75 words]

Friday, October 31, 2008

Relationship ~MR Outline~

1. What is relationship


  • why is it important?
  • why do we need it?

2. First point

  • don't be selfish
  • what is selfish

3. Second point

  • consideration
  • what is consideration
4. Finally
  • guratitude
5. Communication

6. Love for children
  • why do we need it
  • good circle


7. Conclusion

  • My opinion about relationships
  • haveing feeling og gratitude

[43 words]

Wednesday, October 29, 2008

Free writing2 "children"

The second important theme of this movie was children. In my opinion, love by parents is necessary for all of children. Children are thinking about important things more than adults are thinking. therefore, we mustn't say careless things, do nonsense behavior. Children always learn from their familiar person. They will imitate for your behaivors. What's the worse, they will be hurted by your insensitive words.

Many people think children always easygoing, However, we must not forget they also have pure hearts.

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Free Wriing "Relationships"

One important theme of this movie was "relationships" in my opinion. There are many people in this movie, such as family, husband and wife, couple, employer and employee, and so on. we have to change the attitude by the situations in order to make good relationships with many people. We can't get along if we are selfish. For example, we have to be polite when we make business relationships. With your family, you have to be more friendly, and kind.

I can say that all of relationships are made up by trust. You must have consideration if you want to have good relationsips with your important people. You should not only recive but also giving feeling of gratitude for people. Then, you will get along eveerybody, I think.

[129 words]

Sunday, October 26, 2008

Mrs. Doubt ~WE pre List~

love of family
importance of parent
children need their parent
think about what I can do
behave my self
effort to achieve own wish
positive thinking is important
connection of family is precious
insiste right of myself and effort everythings
What should we do in order to keep being family


These are my images and phrases from the movie. I think this theme is "Family".
Conection of family is really precious, isn't it?? And then, we have to think what we can do for our family. We can't keep the relationship without effort.

Mrs Doubt ~WE pre~

I watched the movie whose title was "Mrs. Doubtfire". This movie was so funny. Actually, Mrs.Doubt was a man!! However, it was not a his hobby. There were a serious reason. So, Iwill explain about this movie. Let me start!!

First I will explain about the story. There were a one family. One day, Daniel lost his job, acter, and his wife,Miranda demanded devorce to him. At the same time, he had to separate his children. He really loved them. He thought how to meet them possibly. Then, he found it that Miranda looked for house hkeeper. He asked his brother, who was a makeup-artist, to make him a woman. and he could be a house keeper in his family. He could always see his children. However, many problem happened, for example, his wife make boy-friend, his children noticed what he was doing, and so on. However, all of problems all right finally.

I really felt haert warming after watching this movie. It is important to spend the days with the family. It is too sad not to be able to see own family. Besides, I think that "family" were connectd with heart. Even if they can't meet, they think about each other. It is so precious, isn't it? I want to say we have to cherish our owm family.

This is my firs feeling about this movie. This was not only funny but also have important message. It is "connection of family". We have to spend the time with family. It is more precious things than any others.

[265 words]

Wednesday, October 15, 2008

WE2-03 Outline (Reright Ver.)

1, Introduction about Disney Land
-Generally thinking about Disney Land
-Why do I like Disney Land

2, Body
・First good point(attractions)
- many attractions
- roller coaster
- my favorite attraction

・Second good point(foods)
- delicious foods
- two kind of food shop
- my recommendation

・Third good point (situation)
- great view
- parade, cute characters
- music
- culture and tradition

Finally good point
- no garbege
- many beautiful flower

3, Conclusion
– my favorite part of Disney land

[70 words]